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Change Perspective But Keep Your Point Of View

Change Perspective But Keep Your Point Of View

Perspective isn’t a common songwriting topic.  Most songwriting conversations revolve around Point of View (POV), but there’s more to creating a unique song idea and story than just the main speaker’s point of view.

Perspective is something you can change while still keeping the point of view the same in your song.

Changing the perspective allows you to step to one side, or the other, and see a situation from another angle.  Many times, it can give your song the twist that separates from others with a similar song idea.

Before we jump into the exercise, let’s establish some definitions.

 

POINT OF VIEW

 

Point of view (POV) is how the story is being told and uses a variety of pronouns depending on the POV and the possessive tense (I, he/she, we, they, theirs, his, etc.).

 

PERSPECTIVE

 

Perspective is the voice of the speaker, informed by their beliefs, upbringing, cultural heritage and most importantly for a song, how they’re taking in the situation.  Are they thinking it to themselves, or saying it out loud to others?  What’s communicated can change significantly depending on the perspective.

Point of view focuses on the “who” while Perspective focuses on how the speaker is seeing the scene. For example, is the main character’s voice Internal (thinking to themselves) or External (talking to others).

So how do you work through your point of view and perspective options?

And more importantly, how do you make it second nature as you write?

 

Perspective Change Exercise

 

1  Select a song you’ve already written and identify the following:

  • What is the current point of view?
  • What is the current perspective?
    • Internal/thinking to themselves
    • External/talking to others
  • Is the perspective consistent throughout?
    • If it’s an internal conversation, is it internal all the way through, or are some things being said out loud, while others are deep internal thoughts?
    • If not consistent, change the lyric so it is
  • Now switch the perspective to the opposite and rewrite the lyric

 

2  After the change, answer the following questions:

  • What doesn’t make sense anymore?
  • What becomes more interesting?
  • Does a verse need to change?
  • Has the chorus’ meaning changed or does it still work?
  • Does the emotional engagement increase or decrease?
  • Overall, does the song idea become stronger because of the shift in perspective?

 

3  Pick another song with a different POV

Ideally, you’ll do this exercise for a song in first person, second person/direct address and third person.

 

3 Take a few minutes to go through each song (read the out loud or play them).  You can also send then to a songwriting buddy, play them live, or try them out on your family members.

Get some responses and then write down the answers to the following questions:

  • Which version is the strongest?
  • Why?
  • Did your listeners note anything specific that resonated with them?
  • Which one will be your keeper?

 





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